Comments on: Excerpt from a short story I’m working on http://pauljessup.com/2009/06/24/excerpt-from-a-short-story-im-working-on/ Writer of Fictions Strange Mon, 23 Jan 2012 14:20:34 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Bernie Crowshit http://pauljessup.com/2009/06/24/excerpt-from-a-short-story-im-working-on/#comment-945 Wed, 24 Jun 2009 16:02:16 +0000 http://pauljessup.com/wordpress/?p=1262#comment-945 I like the rusty sink by the television, its cute or funny or something i keep wondering if they just dont clean it or if its a permanent stain or something
what if you didnt know you had seizures and just thought everyone would suddendly wake up on the floor with a bump on the head?
One time a guy had a seizure in the pet shop i just called the paramedics he just fell over by the fishtanks and he looked like he was trying to crawl around and grab things
i was only twelve i didnt know what to do
i digress

i like the rusty sink alot does it have an old rubber stopper on a chain?

Isnt a permanent stain like a oxymoron? Wouldn’t it no longer be a stain but instead like a dye or paint or something?

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