Comments on: second excerpt

By: bernard

bernard — Thu, 04 Sep 2008 14:38:17 +0000

her skull was shorn eh? tubes and shit under the strechy skins up on top eh? shuffling walking, spells that leave you crying exhaustedly on the ground, seems alright. the patchwork dress kinda makes me think of some hippies tho, i don’t know if thats good or bad.
i likes that line about her spells ” there was no wonder in their workings”
imagine the effects of your black creviced sun on the climate, our own sun is entering a period of reduced sunspot activity, i won’t pretend i know what all that means, but the scientists say we’re in for a whole bunch of global cooling, simply because the of the sunspots or whatever. would that mean icebergs or something for your world i don’t know man it’s your place, just throwing in my random thoughts.

By: Paul Jessup

Paul Jessup — Wed, 03 Sep 2008 22:03:50 +0000

Yeah, I’m trying to combine a whole bunch of different sources for something quite new and unique….and I think I’ve got it. Now I only hope I can find a market for it

By: Jonathan Wood

Jonathan Wood — Wed, 03 Sep 2008 20:30:14 +0000

Dude, this new stuff of yours – combining old school and new school – entirely floating my boat. Elric updated and full of polish. Very, very cool.